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Post by Prinny Prinnies Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:18 pm

Volume 1
Chapter 8: Bonds Part. 2

v01ch08:

Status party, character, opening theme song are updated at the first page.
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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:45 pm

"Akhirnya... Beneran mati deh si kakek..." kata Kuro.

"Yah~ Jadi kurang nih komedi ceritanya kalau kakek mati..." keluh Kuro. Sigh
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Post by Prinny Prinnies Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:58 pm

Kuro vi Lolitannia wrote:"Akhirnya... Beneran mati deh si kakek..." kata Kuro.

"Yah~ Jadi kurang nih komedi ceritanya kalau kakek mati..." keluh Kuro. Sigh

sedikit demi sedikit saya convert menjadi cerita serius, keren kan kalau di opori fanfic nya ngga fokus ke 1 genre saja. ada yang komedy (kuro), psychological dan thriller (kury), romance (bloodblossom), adventure n fantasy (prinny).

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Post by Sheratan Sun Jun 27, 2010 5:04 pm

Benar-benar...

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Post by Prinny Prinnies Sun Jun 27, 2010 5:22 pm

Sheratan wrote:Benar-benar...

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good day sir, u were lurking on my thread, so i'll abuse yer ID and make fun of it on my fanfic..

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Post by emasmurni Sun Jun 27, 2010 5:35 pm

"Cel.......ia..", kata Girugamers berusaha mendekati gadis itu.
Nama "Girugamesh" jadi "Girugamers" Kya!

"Saya atas nama Kuro vi Lolitannia, ingin bertemu dengan anda, Celia Agarashi dan saya datang kesini dengan maksud dan tujuan yang baik."

Seingat saya Celia "Igarashi" deh bukan Celia "Agarashi"

Air matapun bergulir jatuh di pipinya, dia tidak bisa menahan nagis melihat keadaan teman-temannya seperti itu.

Kata "tangis" jadi "nagis"

Kuro lalu mengangkat tangannya dan berdiri, tanpa berkata apa-apaa Kuro lalu menuju pintu besi itu.

Kata "apa-apa" jadi "apa-apaa"

Putri itu tidak lain adalah Celia Argarasgi.
Nama belakan Celia salah besar

"Mukyaaa, aku juga disini lagi ada masalah ^^", kata Celia meneruskan kalimatnya denga nada riang.

Kata "dengan" jadi "denga"

Mendengar nama itu Celia menjadi gusar, kedua tangannya memegang kepalanya dan keringan dingin mengucur deras di wajahnya.

Kata "keringat" jadi "keringan"

Terdengar jelas erangan dan rintihan pada napi yang sedang disiksa oleh pada petugas ruang tahanan yang mereka sebut dengan "scyther".

Harusnya "para" bukan "pada"

Awalnya Celia tidak ingin mempercayai hal itu namun dia tidak dapat megelak dari kenyataan.

Kata "mengelak" jadi "megelak"

Panah berapi yang melesat sangat cepat disertai lengkingan memecah alam semesta, busur panah itu mengenai kepala ogre dan perlahan-lahan ogre tersebut hilang menjadi butiran-butiran partikel energy yang berhamburan ke langit-lagit kota.

Kata "langit-langit" jadi "langit-lagit"

"Hm...", jawab Girugames dengan hanya menoleh ke arah Celia.

Nama Girugamesh jadi Girugames

Wushhhh~ sebuah kunai melesai dengan kecepatan tinggi ke arah Fei.

Kata "melesat" jadi "melesai"

I'VE MADE A GREAT COMEBACK AND ANOTHER GREAT STORY WITH ALL TYPE OF FLAVOUR LIKE TRAGEDY, COMEDY AND ACTION. YOU'RE DA BEST WRITER IN OPORI.

P.S. Tenang aja, kalo soal Rep+ ane gk lupa kok

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Post by Prinny Prinnies Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:15 pm

@Emasmurni

thank you for rep+ sir, the ch10 would be the end of volume 1.

i'll prepare for the advance story at volume 2.

and i believe celia name was celia agarashi...

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Post by Sheratan Sun Jun 27, 2010 6:16 pm

Prinny Prinnies wrote:good day sir, u were lurking on my thread, so i'll abuse yer ID and make fun of it on my fanfic..

/jk

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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia Sun Jul 11, 2010 2:25 pm

We Need More Chapter!!!
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Post by kuroro Sun Jul 11, 2010 5:21 pm

hmmm... baru baca, bagus juga Very Happy
nice work
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